The Pit

The walls kept coming they would not stop.  I tried as best as I could to stop the walls. To no avail they still came slowly.  I was pushed to the edge there was no way back now.  I slip and fall down down down,  I know what awaits me and I am scared.  I Feel the shard spikes pierce my body and I die.

TEAM POE

I choose team Poe because I enjoy to read scary and entertaining poem and short stories.  I think that his way writing is very entertaining and imaginative.  I that my favorite piece of work that he has done is A Tall Tale Heart.  I like the mystery about the poem and the insanity of the man who is tell it.  

connecting to nature

The tree outside my room is like my life. I have grown up with this tree as the seasons change i change and and as the tree grows so do i.  The tree gets scars and is broken just like i am throughout my life. And one day that tree will fall just like one day i will fall and we will all be consumed into the ground and be recycled into the earth.

The skeleton in armor

I think that this poem is perfect for a fire side poem.  I has action and has a good beat to it where people could get very into it.  The plot is not very deep and it has some intense sexual situations in it so it is a great poem for your little kids and parents.  I like how the poem told a story and went some where with it.  I do not like poetry that does not flow or go anywhere.